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Well, I just returned to DeviantArt and what a nice drawing to start updating here! Now for the critique.

POSITIVES:
The shading is awesome. The Nihon Patterns were excellent. I love Rin in a very different hairstyle! :D The lighting is astoundingly gorgeous. The way you did the [OBI] was excellent. The fanart is overall something new once in a while and I love it! Cute and impressively beautiful! :D

NEGATIVES:
I hope you won't bear a grudge. Where is her left arm? Behind her? If so, please make sure that it's noticeable.

Overall, continue your excellent lighting and cuteness! And practice more and more! I am expecting something from you, Miyappun! :)

I hope you find my critique decent and please do have a nice day.
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Miyappun Dec 29, 2012
Thank you very much ! ^^

You might not have noticed it because of the pattern I used for her Kimono, so here I show it with blue lines: [link]
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sothcsp Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh thanks for labeling! But still. please make it more noticeable next time. :D Have a nice day.
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